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Short Story Review: Past Jumper by Jamie Heppner

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Posted April 17, 2012 by S. M. Boyce in Dystopian
Past Jumper

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Book Source: From the author.
 
Length: 18 Pages
 
Release Date: July 5, 2011
 
Synopsis: Faster than light travel, it’s impossible, that is until Aiden and his girl friend Jess prove the theory wrong one fateful night. The world drastically changes and Aiden is doing his best to get it back the way it was. With a mixture of old science and new magic he struggles to fix what went wrong while trying to survive the destruction he created.
 
The Short Version:

I can say that, thanks to some good writing, an interesting story, and the fact that it’s a quick read, you will probably really enjoy this.

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This is a very interesting read. It’s short, less than 9k words, but it introduces you to a dystopian world by raising questions that often go tactfully unanswered. You’re often left to ponder and make guesses with the clues you have, and I like that sort of reading.

The end really came to soon, but that’s sort of expected for a short story like this. You want more, and Heppner is working on delivering just that. I can’t help but wonder if these mini books wouldn’t serve better as a full novel, but I obviously don’t know what Heppner has in mind for the series.

There were some editing errors that I couldn’t help but notice — missing spaces, wrong words, the occasional missing word. But I don’t think most readers care much about this sort of thing. It’s not exactly glaring.

Because this is short, you only get a real look into two characters and a delightful, loyal dog. However, that focus was necessary to build these characters in the short space, and I enjoyed learning more about them.

I can say that, thanks to some good writing, an interesting story, and the fact that it’s a quick read, you will probably really enjoy this.


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